All Comments on 'Fall'

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

A rare treat, a well crafted bondage-themed poem with a soft look; the imagery is there yet the focus is only on the sub's strength, not on the sub or the dom or the act itself.

I just loved it. For me a rare glimpse into what I usually can't see (not even metaphorically). The poem has both keen psychological insights into the secrets of the sub's thrills, but it comes adorned in such original imagery and it reads - surprisingly given the situation described, like a flowing dynamic race to something...

Bijou !!!!! Phewwwww! that is orgasmic!