All Comments on 'Falling Into The Machine'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Uh, yeah right

Sack, you'll behave tomorrow, sure...I liked this one a lot

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Well now, that was a fun read...

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Falling...

Definitely been there! Nicely done.

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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HA! Very clever, very clever indeed.

"I'll behave tomorrow." or the next day...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Um, about reality!

It's not really all that it's cracked up to be! I'm quite happy with your poem, that's reality enough for me!

Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
seems I have penned

moments like this myself...in cyber-queen but yours has more color...delightful..blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
sarcastically funny......

and a great way of scribing it......nicely done...don

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Procrastination blues...

Is this an ode to a Gumball machine ~ oh, well, I'll figure it all out tomorrow. *winks*

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