by My Erotic Tale
Of course I loved it, it is short, to the point and so evocative. I think it took more words to tell why I liked it than you took to tell it. Brilliant.
please. I liked the beginning lines, but it seemed more of a style than anything.
It's nice and simple. I think it would also work nicely if it had been presented without the special effects. I do like the way that last line looks. :)
Yours usually are! Poems don't have to be long to be Poignant and neither did this one, short and sweet ~ J
hearts never far away when entwined in mind meld...dr spock ..indeed...love this...blue
It's not clear whether this means physically remote or emotionally remote. In reading it, it seems to work either way. I think it's more powerful with emotionally remote!
I don't care for the WordArt, but I love the poem!
Sort of a "I only miss her when I think of her" ~ holding that endearing thought brings comfort. Lovely pastel illustration compliments this rendering.