All Comments on 'far far away'

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Loved It

Of course I loved it, it is short, to the point and so evocative. I think it took more words to tell why I liked it than you took to tell it. Brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This poem

is mentioned in the new poetry reviews.

~D.A.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
MORE

please. I liked the beginning lines, but it seemed more of a style than anything.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Nice.

Conveys so much in just a few simple words. Loved it!

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I like it

It's nice and simple. I think it would also work nicely if it had been presented without the special effects. I do like the way that last line looks. :)

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Great poem

Yours usually are! Poems don't have to be long to be Poignant and neither did this one, short and sweet ~ J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I think

hearts never far away when entwined in mind meld...dr spock ..indeed...love this...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Far far away?

It's not clear whether this means physically remote or emotionally remote. In reading it, it seems to work either way. I think it's more powerful with emotionally remote!

I don't care for the WordArt, but I love the poem!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
mindful

Sort of a "I only miss her when I think of her" ~ holding that endearing thought brings comfort. Lovely pastel illustration compliments this rendering.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A special feeling of closeness you really don't want to experience.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
GROUND CONTROL

to lover not there. TK U MLJ LV NV

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