All Comments on 'First Fight'

You have such a gift with words Logo, it is simply amazing.

As I've told you, I love this poem. And I still love the "but" at the beginning. Great job.

which is what poetry is all about. Nicely captured, Logo. ~Imp

and all the hurt that goes with it ... great poem!!

~Honey

poem until after this line:

How can it be more real than this?

I really loved it, but after, I was unsure if your love was still gone or there with you. A memory?

Work it a bit and it will be great!

~Syn

Great piece about forgiveness. The best part of a fight is always making up afterwards.

...just like it always is, in a confrontation like this. No one really 'wins'...both parties just feel bad, and you captured the confusion and heartache very well. I hope the ache has healed since then...

You hit the nail on the head with this one, Logo. Thank you for sharing. :)

The sense of confusion, of love and need and fear, was shown perfectly by your words. Wonderful.

Each phraze is more powerful than the last. The pain in this poem is experessed to the fullest extend of the word.

~mlady

I don't know about the relationship you are discussing, but I do know this poem is more than just words.

ty,bd

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.

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