All Comments on 'Flying Fire'

An enchanting read Art,

Loved

Chanting chorus .........................~rising~

ancient as the wind .............~ascends~

under the stars, the Fire's ~smoke~

Fantastic!

~ J

you got me with this one Art... I enjoyed it and think I understood it .. lol.. you have been hanging out with me too much ....... good job I like the mystic qualities..

du~

you have been mentioned in today's reviews

I like the words and how you put them in places. But I dont know this poem. What has Arizona to do with the rest. Is it about indians dancing at a ceramony??? The words are nice but Im not smart enouf I guess. :(

Flying fire?? I believe I am!! I enjoyed the build up. Very good poem!

to steve nash of the suns basketball team in phoenix......*LOL*......being silly.....liked this......don

Vibrates with a kind of tribal energy that puts to great use nature's elements.

One is a tribal dance around the fire and the other is the fire itself dancing. Great double meaning set to the music of poetry. It was both creative and clever, Art! <smile>

Vixxx

what a journey..........

love,

nin-

loved it... not just the words and how they were laid out but the way you laid out the structure of the lines and stanza'a fit the beating of the tribal drum as well!

another great one Arty!

kisses,

T