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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Alice

never had as much fun at the beach. She only got the dodo, it seems that you got the girl.

Thanks for the literary excursion back into a tale of childhood.

Carrie.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
i like this......

Watching you spin your tails

Pulling out dreams

One by one

You have cleverly

Beaded together

On a fine line

you did mean tales didn't you? a nice reflective piece....don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
luv your tight rope

pens...with alliteration to be in awe of...wow wooo wow...great title too..blue

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