All Comments on 'From Between Vermillion Lips'

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thanks for the journey...Art~

This is great poetry. The last 3 stanzas were superb!

Thanks for sharing!

Reading this poem was like basking in the sun on a raft while drinking pink lemonade....pure ambrosia!

~ Imp

I seemed to have missed this one..the wording is cleverly placed...am dazzled by this next to last verse...But the music is there,

always grace, always a radius

of dazzlingly caressed perceptions,

that wish to never understand, ...blue

I love your wording.

Seems a lil like you wanna stand back and just watch .. Jump in my friend. Dip a toe into that water and see what you come up with.

I feel it Liar, I see it, just feels a lil stiff, I really do not mean a pun. I mean that it seems stoic, like you want to say more, but held back ... Just me. I still love it. Your words are perfect, and the sentiment is sexy .. Grrr ...