All Comments on 'Fuck Me'

I'm positive I left a comment here - just checked and it's disappeared. I'm surprised there are no other comments - perhaps the title is off-putting, smacking of those crude porno-poems that use "fuck" carelessly.

But this is not one of those, it's a detailed and vivid ride to orgasmic satiation. "The loved" is one of the words lifts this out of the jostling rabble of erotic porno-poems and the mysterious lov-er is all the more present.

Tess

Am I seeing things that aren't there? In the shape of the poem up to the middle I see a rather long cock!

I read so many porn poems every week now that I get a bit 'meh'. But this one goes somewhere exciting with the subject matter. My only quibble is the 'burning tortured visages'. it came over a false note in a great poem but this is a minor quibble. Getting a recommend.

I felt that ride:) x

But now it's gone. Odd. Anyway, I like this poem a lot. The narrative of the encounter, and especially some evocative phrases such as "breath warmed ears."

by the same name. I like yours better :)

~ normal jean