All Comments on 'Good Morning'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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A bit of eroticism with style in sonnet form; not something seen everyday.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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tongues glide, things slide toward banality, despite the form, god-"honeyed residue" makes me wince, clean it up.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...