by theMasterBaiter
Very nice, but a word of advice: Never explain the meaning of your poem. A back story on how you came to write it is cool but let the poem fulfill its purpose on its own.. After all, you wrote it for those who would dig it, didn't you?
I totally agree that explaining things is lame... but the last time I publish this, I got a crapton of people asking if I was going to off myself, and it got escalated up to mgmt and the poem was removed. That wasn't on this site, but the concern is valid.