All Comments on 'Grandpa'

A nice sentiment but your meter is out on nearly every stanza, try reading it out loud to yourself and see where the words make you stumble

tickling to even things out, but that's easily accomplished. this is a story-telling poem, and the language used reflects this. it has a kind of old-fashioned charm about it. with a little more attention to smoothing out your rhythm, this is a workable poem. keep writing :)