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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey....Art~

sacksackover 18 years ago
funny, sarcastic, etc.

A vast range of emotions is conjured up here. Did you mean to say "Poplar" rather than "popular?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice!

A nice collection of Haiku. I liked the first one best.

Nicely done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

In the second haiku, I think auto-correct changed poplar to popular, leaving that line with eight syllables. Very good, other than that.

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