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TzaraTzaraalmost 14 years ago
Pretty smooth metrically, with mostly inobtrusive rhyme.

I personally find this more amusingly erotic than raunchily so. That's the formal presentation as much as anything.

Fun poem.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hur...

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