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by swallowedscream

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foehn2foehn2over 16 years ago
Good imagery and language!

I love the flow, language and sense of this... "break from the woods," "hesitant whisper," "pixel words," "I write my photograph." The first 10 lines of the next-to-last stanza are quite powerful. Easy to follow, with ballet moves along the way. Well done!

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