All Comments on 'Hope is a Thing With Zeroes'

by swallowedscream

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
*

Great lead line, nice title, very well done. I would think about moving Baby-blue together, instead of the line break.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
~~

Middle-class lament, too familiar to too many. Oh so easy to identify with...

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Keep hoping through...

If you made it to the end of your poem I still have some hope for you. Even more than hope on the poetry part. Fun would be the wrong word, but we all know that we sing our pain just as much as we do when we rejoice.

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
~

Those last three lines are killer. :)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous