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All Comments on 'How could I let you go'

by LadyCibelle

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
the refrain is nice

I'd use "passion" a little less. You used it about 3 or 4 times. You may want to rework the last stanza a little. It seems to be the weakest place in your poem. I think a stronger ending would improve this piece.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very sweet.....

a truly good "warm fuzzy" kind of poem! Superb!

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