by Liar
BT!!!
you are indeed a worthy opponent. I just love the way you write. Maybe we should get rid of the six guns and just go have a drink, cause hell, I wanna be on your team. *grin*
this is the best part for me
"Tonight a comet falls and fades on Mars
but you remain in orbit burning white.
Again to stellar song and cosmic praise.
I kiss your lips and soothe your sparkling skin
to tranquil turmoil blazing deep within,
and watch the Libra glitter in your face"
maybe I'm swayed by the fact that I'm a libra, but I loved the imagery.
oh, I liked this too
"and run your fingers tracing ancient scars" poignant!
and of course, you had perfect meter.
I wish I had a man that would write stuff like this for me!! I'd be on my knees throught eternity, I cant choose my favorite part, its the entire poem!!
Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.
Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.
All these incredible images and metaphor...
Somehow managed to be worked into such a rigid form?
It's like watching gazelle running down a highway.