All Comments on 'I chased Sara'

I plan to read this to my kids. They will ask questions, of course. I'll let you know if they give you a 5, also.

lovely hectic journey and a wondeful ending!!! Better in this form than broken up into pieces. I remember the FB you gave me on Sticky Frog... ;) good advice

xoxo

maria

I'm not so sure it is better in this form, but I'n not sure it isn't, either. :)

I do know it went down nicely when I read it, so what's to complain about?

Love especially "cars on vacation have vacated" and "dead seamen" (Pardon me, but are you gentlemen Seamen?)

Lil Min

I loved this poem!! I loved the way you put her expressions in parenthesis. (so very silly!)

This made me smile and it was the first thing I read today ~ I felt like a child reading it ~ it was like playing tag.

If she is as fun as your telling of the chase is...

prosey thing here. i dig it muchly. great job Sir.

Sweetly playful, teasingly naughty.

Makes me wish I were that Sara.

Well done, Liar.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I especially the parenthetical referrences to Sara's beliefs and personalities, and the way those things clearly shaped the runner's actions.

What an awesomely sweet little journey. I do have to admit I was sad when it ended so quickly.

verbally visual!!

To me it meant that you would take any journey for her, if she would let you, by saying you could. excellent - poigniant to me at the moment