by foehn
many have had similiar dreams, but your description was unique, the last stanza was beautiful!
just a thought, maybe consider leaving out the part that it was a dream, it would make it even more mysterious and etheral
More so on the romantic side. I really enjoyed your poem. I wouldn't want to wake from that dream :)
Your choice of words were superb!
your wit shines in this literary Art
I would have never guessed where this word
trail spiraled down to , haven't met <grin>
cute and very clever
One question, how do you get such
clarity in your dreams <hahaha>
excellent poetry~
You might want to tighten up the first paragraph, to avoid longer sentences spilling over lines. Otherwise pretty amazing, just got better and better!