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tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
ONES MORTALITY

from which Zero can not withhold

todski28todski28almost 9 years ago
harsh

And grounding

The end verse is well done

Love the rhyme of joy and toys it contrasts well an d leaves a sound echo on the end of an interesting write.

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