All Comments on 'I have done it all in many states'

by leBonhomme

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HarryHillHarryHillalmost 11 years ago
The Beach Boy's said it better

and with a snappy beat. no vote

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
an homage to the girls

of many states as well as a series of pop songs, what? no Florida? time to travel on...and keep at it!

leBonhommeleBonhommealmost 11 years agoAuthor
Hi Guys

You are both right, and after looking at your long lists of poems and reading a couple, I think I had better stick to prose. Thank you for commenting. This was inspired purely by song titles, as one of you recognized, just playing at an attempt to incorporate a few. The other poem I wrote 40+ years ago - hardly have to suggest how it was inspired. She never saw it.

HarryHillHarryHillalmost 11 years ago
Hey, don't give up without a fight

the poem had some interesting things going on

leBonhommeleBonhommealmost 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks, maybe. At least there aren't stalkers here telling me they can't read and blaming me.

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