by sack
I can see the images evoked by the sounds. Really well done! I like it a lot!
always inspire visual imagery that is beautiful and poignant. I wish I could write poetry instead of murder..lol. Great job Sack, you never disappoint.
and lots of great lines......but i'll pick this:
a cooing mourning dove
just beyond consciousness
that is just splendid.....nicely done........don
When the creative voice calls ~ willingly partake of the inspiration being given. Loved the musical references. Well Done!