All Comments on 'I just want... to be wanted'

by MagicaPractica

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
:)

I cant imagine that sentiment being expressed any better!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I liked your poem a lot!

It very poignantly captures the need in all of us to have some one care for us ... in a special way.

I tried to express this in my story, "To Be Wanted," but you captured it much more concisely.

Nicely done.

Regards, DJ

SweetSassyVixenSweetSassyVixenover 17 years ago
Very Well Said

Magica, I have to say I loved what you wrote! You said it perfectly!!!

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 17 years ago
Good one

A very sensual poem. I liked the sentiment too.

ps. You forgot the eyes!

deathlynxdeathlynxalmost 17 years ago
Mind and body

Both quite seductive!

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
The words

were beautiful, but the format looked really choppy. (with 6 For's) Maybe one would have sufficed and then grouped the delicious descriptions into 3 line stanzas. Either way, with a body like that she would be 'wanted' by 99% of the male population. (Plus a good many other women..haha)

rengadeirishmanrengadeirishmanover 16 years ago
lovely

beautiful imagery, felt like i could see the subjects body as if it were in front of me

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
^

I guess I'm part of that 99% of the male population and Amyfriend is right, you wouldn't have to ask me more than once.

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I'm a passionate, married, BBW looking for an outlet for my writing. I've written quite a few stories of varying degrees of quality over all the categories. I hope you find something you like.