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by greeneyedvirgin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

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"That used to hold me tight."

"That overlooked the faults in me,"

Not a bad first effort.

Five.

greeneyedvirgingreeneyedvirginabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I wrote these pomes when I was in high school. I just came across them a few days ago and decided to post them for all of you to enjoy.

jenellesljenelleslover 9 years ago
Should Be A Song

This could be a very nice song. The words, the sentiment. Thank you. You brought back a long forgotten memory.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
WHEN YOU VISUALIZE

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GrntmbGrntmbover 8 years ago
WOW!!

WOW! What an emotionally powerful poem! It has me totally speechless in a very good way! It's almost if I'm reliving what the person is reliving. This is definitely from the heart...really well done!

aAmour1964aAmour1964over 7 years ago
Sweet

Sweet, full of beauty, emotional and powerful...

Thank you again and again!

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I have been writing ever since I could remember, it has always been my escape from the harsh reality of the world that we all live in. Thank you everyone for taking the time to read my stories and send me an e-mail. I finally self-published my novel. It is available on Amazo...