by Willow Rain
sister witch, you and I both.
loved this poem, you state so easily what I plunder my mind for the right words to cry when I am all alone and wondering about him.
xoxox
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It flowed easily with an economy of language which identifies a competent poet. The subject matter made be feel sad and wistful - another strength to elist emotion with your words. I hope, one day, the boy will know you well enough not to draw back first and you will trust your inner feelings to allow someone to shield you against the world so you may remain open and not closed.
you are rapidly turning into a new favourite - your ability to manipulate and twist masterful - you have just the right balance of wryness and pathos in this ... excellent!
Music box simple and universal. Who hasn't been there, in some sense? Thank you.