All Comments on 'Illumination'

nothing really strong here,

but what a way it dances.

and the rhythm is strong...Thanks for sharing!

I find it very strong. The line breaking is used very well, and the metaphor is maintained throughout. An excellent poem, CW!

Fly

oh how fun

an audience of one

curiousity peaked

and passion burn

wherever was it

she found that to learn?

Indeed there is

Nothing as sweet as

A professional woman...

this packs a punch, but straight up it sells itself with Girls, Girls, Girls. nicely done......don