All Comments on 'Inexpressible'

i'm guesssing it about blood, blue to red, healing.

but whatever it's about, i enjoyed the lyrical cadence, and the minimalistic but evocative choice of words.

more please.

...the intangible, the inexpressible, is what renews us.

This is your best to date My brighty, well done.

SN

this as a poem about your Higher Power. God or Goddess, if you will.

it's about knowledge, i thought maybe love, i'm not sure, but them's my thoughts.

your words could encompass so many things, love, D/s , your child,it is a poem that each individual can apply to them selves.

brightie... i read it and think of you becoming a mother. weakness becomes strength.. during labor a mother is so vulnerable in and of herself, but so powerful in her changing position.. in bringing forth life ...

it can calso be read as the submissive reaching her pinnacle

i love the paradox and the contrasts.. i love the contrasts

i just love it. it is your best.

sg