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inevitable. it will be and little you can do about it feeling, for me, was very strong. beautifully done...
wistfully,
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Liked this one alot Imp, especially the last few lines, really well done!
your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey
Clearly shows that we are all powerless againt the passing of time. Nicely told!
Passionate prose, filled with the need to warn and explain. Urgency written within, making it a fast read.
Absolutely marvelous. Thank you.
...captured completely in your powerful use of language!
That was simply wonderful. Beautiful use of language and style. Very impressive, Imp!!!
i'm usually not a big fan of poetry, but this one is wonderful. It gave me the feeling of being stalked by something large and... not necessarily cruel, but ruthless.
Well captured Imp, the dangers and frustrations of possiblities. "Potential" may well be the world's most complicated curse word. Many layers in this work.
You have a way with words that I envy! Another excellent piece!
is devastating in its perfection. And addicting... Thank you, Imp. LJ.
you are so very impressive...your phrasing...your wit....
you make words a living entity
awaiting the morn on the eastern horizon. TK U MLJ LV NV