All Comments on 'Jagged Sinus Trip'

Read this aloud folks. If you think it's a good silent read (and it is) ..... well, just read it aloud.

You have sought a path of enlightenment...and found it through your um sinuses? This is a marvelous powerhouse of a poem that had me laughing and marveling. What a great balance of form and content. And so musical it skips. :)

cool poem... you are a gifted man ;)

Like rhyming diamonds. This one sparkles.

jim :)