All Comments on 'Listening To Water'

by Liar

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SummerMorningSummerMorningover 19 years ago
Nice confused feeling...

You know... I can really relate to the feeling of, "Goddamn, what I would do, but I shouldn't, but I would, but I'm such an idiot listening and talking with these people when FUCK ALL but she's..."

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
mention

your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

thanks for the journey~

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Outstanding..

Liar..

this is a wonderful work. I can see the spinning of the mind, the person sitting there as time slides slowly focused on each drop of water gliding around her as rain would to a Goddess. Thank you for the vision of reality desires lashed with the moments of social pressures..

du lac

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