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and the message, but the rhyme feels forced. Trim all the excess words and it could be wonderful. Keep writing!

Never mind the other comment...it IS wonderful, LadyC. You've put into words what many of us have felt, but perhaps haven't been lucid enough to state. I don't care if the rhyme is a half-meter off, or what. I just found this one, and I like it! Thanks, but why don't I see anything written in '06?

not to have read this one before!

However, I have to assume that you are talking about Nick here my Lady.

So whether people believe it's forced or not. If it comes from the heart, then it’s the best kind of poem there is, isn't it?

DC