All Comments on 'May I Kiss You?'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Well Done

A very nice write.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nice sentiments sweetly expressed; perhaps it would be stronger if "May I" on each third line was replace with "and".

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Nice poem and ..

if you get down on your knees and say 'pretty please' I'll consider..haha. (Just joking).

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
But Amy!!!

See what good old chivalry could do to one of Lit own?<P>

Reminded me a bit of the schools of manners of yester days.

Some people naivly thought that they will go out of buisness....

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