All Comments on 'Memories'

I look forward to the rest of life

Some answers have I though mostly I fail

The choices I've made threw out my life

Define my soul its needs my life

1. Work to reduce the unfortunate repetitions of "life".

2. threw out= throughout

3, Some answers "I have" might read better than "have I"

Otherwise, I like the poem

A young man thinks of yet to be

An old man lives in his memories

I am caught between these two extremes

And know not who I am

the feelings and emotions were strong in this

very deep write, what better way to describe those emotions

than poetry~