All Comments on 'Midnight'

Style and form isn't all that important when writing free verse, but I do believe you should've narrowed this down a bit. Love what you're saying but it almost appears as a story to me.

No harm meant, Christina

I like it! your imagery is awesome!

I enjoyed the rant..^5 for that but it was like a letter from one's self well my one cent~

This poem has such a yummy feel to it. One of those you just sit back, inhale, and swirll..

Just loved it. The imagery just flashes before your eyes and its beautiful. I think this will be one of those poems ya want to read again and again. Just because you love the *feel* of it. Wonderful one here~!!

...it reminds me of the old days, when I could write a poem about just about anything, and it seemed so ESSENTIAL, so all-encompassing of life. I can't do that anymore, sad to say, but, happily, YOU CAN. Great!

... emotion. Very well done! ~Imp

... almost reads as a stage play.

Full of emotion, imagery... awesome job hon.

First read for the day for me, the rest will have a hard job in comparison. Well done!! ;-)

very well done.