by tungtied2u
i've tasted this bitter pill..
you made it seem so lovely..making me wonder why it ended.
i keep trying to make my way through the poetry, but i'm in the proccess of a move, and a vacation of sorts so just not time now..
when i get settled in florida, there will be more time for reading and voting, i have read a few of yours though..
hang in there with the votes..
eventually it will pay off!
ryn..my daughters very suddenly..very abrubtly matured into a fine young lady..it was sort of intentional..to end it like i did..i suppose i could have written plenty about her growing..changing..but i made my point..well thought i had.
anyhow, thanks for the comment!
Beautiful.
"The flexing of your calves
as I follow behind
Over moss covered boulders
to gaze emerald pools below"
Been there.....
and I remember the same simple thing
A wonderful piece
Thank you