All Comments on 'MLP ~ Cometh the Wild'

This poem holds the building power of the approaching wild horses. Free, strong and attainable only in the moment. Nice write Art keep going

du~

The refrain beautifully illustrates the subject-- well done.

Fly

Cometh the wonderful poet <Grin>

This is wonderful Hun, I love

the way it builds and flows and

rolls of my tongue.

Keep up the great work my friend!

~JC (Gushing as always) <wink>

imagination and powerful use of words, W*E*L*C*O*M*E

sGp

makes this a stronger piece. I enjoyed it. Good job, Art.

This is full of rhythm. My new favorite of your

out west poems. sandspike

This a good poem with lots of action, a fun read.

strong pen for you...bow to the muse...you did him well...blue

"gather together on gathering day

they're coming

yes, coming

wild horses are coming this way."

what else can I say? you here, have mastered the art of repititon - put it to music

"Beating the earth in a drumming sound

hundreds of poundings pounding the ground"

with drums

on the slight downside, the first two lines could and SHOULD be stonger

Thunder that rumbles across a cloudless sky - change cloudless to something else

This is your weakest line, kind of old, kind of akward:

"is the sound of an ancient wild and free pride"

The rhythm of coming and coming

creates tension -

and builds the image

of the thundering herd.

But you knew that -

well done once again, Art.