- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Morning Cold
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The day fell open, like a flower
suddenly out on this cold morning,
its reddish petals unveiling
a pale yellow centre. High
above, the clear, cold blue - old
and matchless over this wide
winter, the slow fields lying dazed
below. Still, there's no chance
of my entering this silence,
well locked up in warm walls
and a new, green sweater, wrapped
in the day's obligations & all.
- COMMENTS
Ashesh9over 10 years ago& a new green sweater , well locked up
In the days' obligations ----
A very apt metaphor Demure .
Angelineover 10 years agoand the metaphor of the morning as a flower opening is beautiful. Thanks for posting both your poems today, I've really enjoyed reading them.
