All Comments on 'Morning Cold'

Still, I wish you could have joined me out there.

and the metaphor of the morning as a flower opening is beautiful. Thanks for posting both your poems today, I've really enjoyed reading them.

& a new green sweater , well locked up

In the days' obligations ----

A very apt metaphor Demure .

I like the use of color.

I noticed the skillful enjambment.