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by demure101

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
Alas , Demure 'tis

September already , warm August is gone !

Kiki_catKiki_catalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

You could excel in classic haiku, I bet.

NeonuroticNeonuroticalmost 11 years ago
Good to see your writing demure

Love the comparison!

This summer I found a mushroom the size of large grapefruit. It was heavy and imagined it was full of earwigs!

RemecRemecalmost 11 years ago

Ah, yes, the line between seasons...always so full of mixed images. You captured one of them quite well.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 11 years ago
Simply.....

...beautiful. I loved the reference to Degas tutus. A five.

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