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sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
I like it

I like the layout and works for me, I just found it a little

wordy, but then doesn't it say too much of anything is bad for you?

seranadeseranadeover 19 years ago
This Poem

I can since the true Art of this Poem, turo. Now this is more like the Art I know. I know you like humor and say that laughter is the best conversation, but I always enjoyed your wisdom tales or poems. It didn't seem long or to much of anything, I found it to be moving and soothing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Zen master reappears..

the inbetween world is laced within this poem.. I loved it Art.. a strong message to all about where we are going in this life.. I found it filled with wisdom and honest visuals of just what is it all about? Divisity is your middle name lol...

ty for the write

Du~

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