by steve porter
Dr. Nasdi is so bad {sorry, couldn't resist} and such a rage he contains. Very dark person you've presented in such a darkly humorous way.
And a well-written, clever one with an O Henry ending, to boot. You're just full of surprises. :-)
Oh wow, seriously a sonnet not overloaded with poesy, nor tweediness. Let's go read your other one, Steve, what did I say about not being a fan last week. I am becoming one.
Very smooth with sweet flow. You paint and we se/saw so much, more. I loved it from the first phrase till the last, thought. No dangling here, just sweet perfection ~ Nice, Nice pen ~!!!