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by KdDiva

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
I stopped at the second line and obssessed

i couldn't accept 'Pearlescent' I so wanted 'Pubescent' there. Gossamer's a dangerous word to use around here too.

PrisonTeacherPrisonTeacherabout 15 years ago
Welcome first read of yours.

Quite good! I look forward to reading more of your material.

I liked how you took care of this deed without gynecologically crude nomenclature.

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