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your piece was reviewed (in brief) today at Literotica's New Poetry Reviews and Recommendations here: http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32877227&postcount=2908

I'm afraid not being fully recovered I didn't give it the in-depth appraisal I like to give as a matter of course BUT, having said that, I really loved this work of yours. It was my favourite of today's offerings and left me feeling so relaxed and pleased to have read some decent poetry!

So few words, so much said.

Strong haiku. Good work.