by she_is_my_addiction
Your poem was mentioned in the thread
"A Poem Academy"
Hot but short! Mmmmm!
Love to see more, a very good first submission!
very erotic haiku hunni
pj
nice imagery!
Very nice, SIMA...straight to the point!
sweet, direct and to the point. tres bien aussi.
I always have been a sucker for velvet. :-)