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Click hereThe PC bustle
I got bumped
nudged
hugged
teased
winked at
I might have even got bitch slapped
I don't know
it didn't hurt
every turn I turned
I met some body I knew
and even a few,
who were new
some aren't so friendly
glaring stare I feel
from the tone of their words
I 'whooped' in a quick rally
dodging adds
and shit that looked like Spam
the hustle and bustle
from highway to waves
was crowded today
I shrug
squeeze into a slot
rattle my say
turn away
stretch my arms wide
as I turn and look out my window
across the open field
at the tranquil river
flowing by
Maybe I'll write today!
The silence broken when
the cat speaks "NOOOOO"
toooo cute! LOVED IT and how true in life as well! :)
I can see it also applying to life and criticism in general. Ah.. we roll with it and use it eh?
Nice work, you get better with every new write and it's good to see the progression ;)
An absolutley cracking poem Art, loved it! Very accurate and humourus I loved
Maybe I'll write today!
The silence broken when
the cat speaks "NOOOOO"
My cat does that too!
~ J
Yep that would be you, only I don't think to many could bitch slap you and get away with it. And shadow demanding attention these days, Pet the kitty Art.
Nin:)