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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
nice!

another good one Buddy!

keep them coming!

kisses Arty!

T

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Very nicely done, Art. Your painting always puts me in a nature mood.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Flying

Loved it, especially 'Criss crossing and lazy crazy eights'

Very nice.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice

I don't read much poetry because I don't really understand it, that was beautiful...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ummm, is this the part of

Pelican Bay that is "designed to house the state's most serious criminal offenders in a secure, safe and disciplined institutional setting".

Is this poem more subtle than what the comments indicate... is this a prisoner looking out the window at "Pelican Bay"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you must be refering

to the white pelican...I have seen them here in Florida as well ...beautiful birds...

nice tribute...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I really enjoyed this

Good write.

Curiouswife

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
it leaves one.......

engrossed in the imagery......great piece......don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Dreamy ~

My fav. of yours Art ...

I love your imagery. The slow, steady flow that just let's us live right there in that moment, mesmerized by your winged friends there at Pelican Bay ... So when can we all visit, sounds like my kinda place for a relaxing vacation ... *grins ...

Love it ~!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

Yawn

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