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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Oh oh ~ you call 'em as you see 'em;

the guy doesn't fare to well here.

Enjoyed it, of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
omg an ode

to tangible barbie boy toys...what a guy won't do to feel good....great work...blue

sacksackover 18 years ago
excellent, as always...

Is there a word missing in the sentence with "will him"?

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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good help is hard to find

appearantly left to hang

streched starched whitewashed washing

idle handed servants finger tipped

whipsmart and needheeded

leave to serve and serve to remind

that anything worth doing

and isn't always this way?

you only ever end on yourself anyhow

we are all of us alone aren't we

inside our eyes i mean

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
FLASHBACK ..

{{{ CURIOUS }}}...

I loved this !! ***** !

You do entice the mind

my girl, leaving me

tripping on my tongue.

Mouth Open.. Awe'd ..

-sGp-

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
sometimes your words....

have a twisting of the knife effect. it may have that knife effect, but i still love it......nicely done......don

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
sometimes your words....

have a twisting of the knife effect. it may have that knife effect, but i still love it......nicely done......don

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