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by Liar

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tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Love the pace

and wordplay of this poem Liar, but I'm not sure I understand it. Wonderful phrasing.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Very strong....

...and startling in spots. Excellent phrasing and just damn good poetry, Liar.

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Still scratching my head

I'm with TT2U on this one-- engaging word play, but after several reads I still don't get it.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
great word play

Is she what he's calling a 'smash and grab'?

Honey123Honey123almost 20 years ago
Interesting

Liar, I love everything you write...including this poem.

Congrats on your 100th poem!

Kiss,

Honey

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