All Comments on 'Precious Cargo'

provoking...well penned...blue

My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.

....any immigrant can relate to, the wistfull memories of "The Old Country" mixed with the hope for a new and better life. I have lived this poem in my way, simply lovely.

:Note: I am not using the thermometer any more.

stuff here.

~Papi reads

because he can,

turns paper thin truths

in paper dry hands.~

That's a poem all by itself.

great job

makes a person think liar. i enjoyed this, like most of your stuff!

is the one families pass down, generation after generation. This poem has a fragile and wonderful feel to it. Great work, Liar