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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice flow

I like this. It has a certain flow to it--as if once you start reading it the poem itself accelerates. The end has a nice funnel-down effect:

"For we all dwell in the same house together,

And the house is this world,

And this world is enough."

Very nice.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Godliness as a metaphor

I just loved it and was touched by it so very much! For anyone who has some 'digestive problems' (like I do) when a lot of super natural stuff is thrown around while in the meantime genocides are going around like there is no tomorrow, but so few seem to say: 'Hey, Hallo Mr./ Ms. Deity, Are you there? a child is dying here for no reason!' Silence. What else is new? I have given up on the super natural version of religion myself long time ago.

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